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Title: Sensibilität
Model & make up: Elisa k.
Photo: Strych9ine photography & retouch
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hey,
At first glance, my favorite thing about this photo is your use of light. Im not sure what your intention was when you took this photo, but when I look at it, it seems like she is mourning the death of someone because of the way she looks longingly towards the light.

My only critiques about this photo would be one, that the fact that the blanket is out of focus seems a bit off to me. I think that if you were going to choose to take the picture with an open aperture like this then maybe the picture should have been taken from a lower angle so as our eyes move up towards the girl the picture comes into focus. This movement is created a little with the right leg, but since the photo is head on like this its a bit strange to have the one leg in focus while the other is not.
the second critique would be that the stance at which she holds the guitar looks slightly unnatural.

Other than those two things, this is a great photograph, and like I said, the use of light is excellent.